पिया भांवरी !!

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प्रीत तुम्हारी हर युग में निभाई
कभी राधा तो कभी मीरा बन आई
इस युग में बता दे कहाँ हैं तेरी परछाई?
बन जाऊ मैं उसकी पिया भांवरी !

तुझ जैसा खेलें वो आँख मिछोली
बिन बतियाएं कर दे बात वो पूरी ;
हर गोपी के मन में सजाये रंगोली
पर मान ले मुझे वो अपने मन की रानी

तुझ जैसी सम्पथी हो गुणों की
प्रेम भाव से जीते जगत को;
करुना से भरें झोलियाँ पीडित की
विष बनें अमृत उसकी चाह से

मिले जब मिले उसके प्रेम का सागार
कभी राधा तो कभी मीरा बनू मैं
उसके रंग में रंग जाऊं मैं
कहलाऊं उसकी मैं , पिया भांवरी !!

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Post Edits : Some major spelling goof ups !!






Comments

Surya, the Ayrus! said…
The sufi touch...the benign restlessness in love... you so beautifully bring the love,lost and now where feeling out... i always knew you were a genius, but now u proving to be a romantic genius! wow aparna, way to go!
June 25, 2008 at 10:22 AM
Surya, the Ayrus! said…
oh ya if i forgot mentioning, i loved it:)
June 25, 2008 at 10:23 AM
aastha-inks said…
thanks re.. it's my joblessness which is gettin this out of me!!
June 29, 2008 at 5:58 PM
Cheeku said…
truly.. u write good hindi poems :)
man.. good one.. i need to take some training from you :P
sikhaogi???
June 30, 2008 at 11:13 PM
Surya, the Ayrus! said…
this cover picture is from shangrila???
July 5, 2008 at 9:05 PM
aastha-inks said…
u have a good memory !! yea .. !!
July 7, 2008 at 9:05 PM
Spectator said…
I heard a similar song about krishna-mira some months back... by arooj aftab... it had very similar lyrics, this poem reminded me of the same.... good one... copied in local collection :)
August 17, 2008 at 5:30 PM
aastha-inks said…
copied in local collection as in?? anyway i was jus inspired by that pic put up there.. i shld listen to d song u r talkin abt tho.. :)
August 17, 2008 at 10:28 PM
Spectator said…
copied in local means, i do collect such songs, so i copies this one as well. n which pic u r talking bout ??? n drop me an email, i ll send you the song.
August 18, 2008 at 1:11 AM
Rag said…
woah!! tats seemeed like poen by kabirdas or meerabhai!!!

bahut acha laga!!! dint knw ppl can still write hindi poems!!
words which you've used seemed like your a poet !!
veryy impresssive!!
August 20, 2008 at 9:01 AM
HRK said…
Nice work. May be you want to read Kailasam's poem on Krishna.. a very different view though:
http://tpkailasam.blogspot.com/2008/09/krishna.html

This is another blog page that I began working on.
-H
April 11, 2009 at 1:19 AM
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